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El Fe del Oro

Joined August 2009.

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I’m an artist by the name of El Fe De Oro and I love to paint, sculpt, read and write stories. Soo, yeah…

Stories

  1. The Writer Who Stopped Writing

    The Writer who stopped writing was stopped by time because time wouldn’t stop for her. She was stopped by the clouds that had never left her mind, and continued to rage war and stir. It’s not so much that these clouds were so vile that this...

  2. Lovely Lady

    11 years old, yet you will take part in not earthly things, but God’s green little garden. You’re dearly missed, but you will live on In the hearts of those who saw you fall, In the minds of those who loved you so much, In the memories of t...

  3. Magic Corrodes

    Despite this hot and humid Saturday night, she still stands at her usual corner. Advertising her products and slapping the greedy mosquitoes on her arms and legs, which are the only creatures to taste her for free, she glances my way, and she knows tha...

  4. Maria's Son

    After “bruising” me, Maria stood up. “I had a son like you. He was tall, like you too” She said. “What happened to him?” I asked her. She didn’t answer. “How old are you?” She asked me. “Fourt...

  5. Is this What a Mother Feels Like?

    After my shower, I changed into the clean clothes that Maria gave me. They were large, but more comfortable than my old clothes. Maria was sitting on bed with a some toiletries. “Viene aqui, boy” She commanded. I thought that meant come he...

  6. A Change in Apearance

    Maria looked at me with disgust. “When is the last time you were clean?” she asked me sharply. “Sorry.. I can leave..” I said with my “tail” in between my legs. Maria grabbed my arm: “Look: You’re fine. ...

  7. Some Christmas

    As I ran down the steps, I smelled pine. As I reached the end of the steps, I greeted my mother quickly because I was ready to dive in Christmas presents. However, my expectations were shot. There were only 2 presents: 1 from mom and another from dad. ...

  8. Nobody, She's No one

    I gazed into the full bodied mirror, examining my body shape. Studying it closely. I was ready to get married. “Will you stop obsessing over your size, you look fine!” Anastasia told me. “You want to impress that man, don’t you?...

  9. Anastasia

    I gazed into the full bodied mirror, examining my body shape. Studying it closely. I was ready to get married. “Will you stop obsessing over your size, you look fine!” Anastasia told me. “You want to impress that man, don’t you?...

  10. Maria

    Sandra and I followed the boys into the small, but neat apartment. It was weird to think that the two boys were brothers. Then, I came to the conjecture that they were foster brothers. “Mom, we’re home!” Brendin yelled. Suddenly, a sm...

  11. Shawn

    I looked directly into his eyes. Standing close to him, the boy looked like he could have been 20 years old. “What kind of city kid doesn’t know how to walk properly?” He asked me. I didn’t answer. “You left your bag in th...

  12. On Him

    Suddenly, one of the boys came over to our table. “Hello, excuse me Miss, I’ll pay for these young kids right here.” He said, speaking with a slight Irish accent. The waitress glared at him for a second but gave him the bill. He paid ...

  13. 2 Choices

    I walked out of the bathroom casually, but I noticed that people were staring at me. I sat down and read the menu non-nonchalantly. “What were you doing in there?” Sandra asked. “Washing my hands” I answered. Suddenly, Sandra an...

  14. Her

    “Jaymie, hi sweetie” Said the woman. Her voice quavered. “It’s mommy! If you come home, I’ll finally meet you” She said, speaking to me as a new mother speaks to her baby. At that moment, I hated her. She had no righ...

  15. Phone Call

    Sandra and I walked into a restaurant on a street corner of Manhattan. As the door swung open, the strong smell of grease entered my nose. I instructed Sandra to stay at a table and order something small like a water. I walked over to a waitress. R...

  16. Time to Go

    The harsh sound of the conductor’s voice woke me up immediately. Sandra’s head was still laying on my shoulder, and she seemed to be in a deep sleep. I didn’t want to wake her, so I had chosen to stare out the window. Then, it finally...

  17. Starting A New Life On the Road

    The train door closed as the passengers scrambled aboard. I could tell Sandra didn’t like this at all. “James, I have to go home. What are my parents going to say when they find me missing!?” She yelled. “I don’t know. I&#...

  18. An Unexpected Suprise

    As I looked in her eyes, I heard an sudden overwhelming sound. Almost like a siren screaming, as it pierced our ears. Sandra jumped from the noise of the wailing siren. “What the hell?!” I said loudly. “What’s that noise?”...

  19. Children, Welcome To the Hunt

    “Welcome, all of you to the annual hunt! Now, I doubt that any of you know why you’re here, do you? Anyone? No? Okay then, allow me to explain. You see, You all will be hunting for items on this list here” “What kind of items?&...

  20. Goodbyes

    She worked quickly with the scissors, cutting a lot of hair off. She cut off my bangs, but combed the front part of my hair up. “Now you look like an Anthony.” She said, feeling content. I helped her out the window and we began walking to t...

  21. Come with Me

    I wanted Sandra to come with me so I went to convince her. Although, I knew this was an impossibility, it couldn’t hurt to try. I climbed on her “sub-roof” and knocked on her window. She opened it and jumped. “James, your hair&#...

  22. James Moore is Dead

    I sneaked into the closet where my dad kept his hair dye. That stuff was his “Fountain of Youth”. I also took a couple of his shirts along with mine and I packed them. I dyed my hair black and took my packed clothes, food, and- oh I needed ...

  23. I Need to Run

    Waiting in her office, I pressed my hands in my forehead. The principal walked in the room, with a phone in her hand. “James, Jamal, this is the 8th fight you’ve been in the two years you’ve been here and I’m getting tired of th...

  24. The Plan Takes an Unexpected Turn

    When the bus dropped us off, Sandra and I walked toward the entrance. Since I threatened the 3 kids on the bus, they hadn’t bothered Sandra again. I made Sandra promise to meet me out in the front after school. In the halls, I ran into a certain ...

  25. Time to Formulate a Plan

    As I woke up, light flooded the room. I heard someone come closer to me and sit on the bed. “Good morning” said Sandra softly. I lifted my head and I was so happy to see her smiling. She had bowl of cereal with her. “It’s for yo...

  26. Comfort

    “Sandra, you gotta promise not to tell anyone about this.” I asked her. She nodded vigorously. “I wanna run away. My dad won’t miss me and neither will my brother” I told her. She gaped. “You can’t. Where are y...

  27. So Many Questions

    In the middle of the night, I climbed out my window. I needed to talk to someone. I couldn’t talk to my brother because he would tell dad . If I told my dad, well.. I’ll leave that to percolate. I needed to talk to Sandra. It took me half a...

  28. Mom

    My father handed me the picture I kept on my dresser. It was a faded picture of a woman with long brown hair holding a 2 year old boy. The woman held the boy in both her arms and sat her head on the top of his. She was in her early 20s. The boy was sit...

  29. Leave Me Alone

    I left Sandra’s house, walked to her bus stop, and sent my brother the directions to come pick me up. I could’ve walked home, but I knew it would cause even more trouble. Finally, my older brother showed up in his Kia Soul and rolled down h...

  30. I Don't Wanna Go

    We got off at the bus stop and she walked me to her house. Holding my hand. She unlocked the door and went in. Her house was nice and clean.“Hi mama! Hi daddy!” Sandra yelled. A couple appeared at the steps. The man was black with glasses j...

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