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Turtles :)

Joined June 2009.

31 stories, 0 challenges, 14 comments, and 13 friends

I would love for you to comment my stories please… if you don’t like it… tell me what I can do to make it more appealing! I have a very overactive imagination… and I think you will be able to tell which of my stories are fiction and which aren’t. Some are about my life, some are about what I would like my life to be, and some are about some wacky dream I had the night before!!

Stories

  1. The Orphanage 16 (edited ficlet)

    “I just didn’t want you guys to have to be worried about me all the time." Fay said. “Well maybe we shouldn’t." Aleena snapped, who remained where she was before. “What’s that supposed to mean?" said Fay glaring at Aleena as...

  2. ... Thinking how wierd it was that I still trick-or-treated

    I walked into my History class and glared at the over head projector that was set up and cast a bluish glow on the wall. “Uhg, notes again,” I moaned, sitting next to Amy,“really?” “It’s better than a test!” S...

  3. The Orphanage 15 (edited ficlet)

    “No, Aby’s too tall, why not Marco?" said Fay, looking at Marco. “But I’m taller." said Marco confused. “Oh ya," Fay blushed, “go ahead Aby." Abigail looked from Marco to Fay, Sophia did the same, then they both smiled...

  4. The Orphanage 14 (edited ficlet)

    “Hey, can you help me try to stand up?" Fay asked, changing the subject. “Uh, ya, are you sure your ready though?" Said Sophia with a look of concern. “Nope. Just help me." replied Fay. “OK…" Sophia said sighing, she he...

  5. The Orphanage 13 (edited ficlet)

    “Huh?” said Fay drowsily. “Aleena calm down, this isn’t her fault, we all agreed to this.” Said Marco. “CALM DOWN!?” Aleena had had it, “Just a few hours ago, Fay almost died! We knocked out our foster dude thing, and robbed his house...

  6. The Orphanage 12 (edited ficlet)

    After about 45 minutes of walking they stopped to rest. They were all tired and weren’t used to this much exercise, and couldn’t walk very long because of the poor nutrition, and Lucas had to stop for a while. When they were rested, Marco took his ...

  7. The Orphanage 11 (edited ficlet)

    “Hey how are you feeling?” Lucas asked. “Lousy,” Fay said weakly. “feels like I’ve been hit by a train, what happened after he kicked my head?” She asked, “You shouldn’t have come back.” she added attempting to get up, only to be p...

  8. That made me smile :)

    In A-Block we were watching this really out-dated movie about teens and dating. I put my head down and was slowly drifting to sleep. “Camilia, Pay attention,” the teacher said, tapping on my desk. I jerked my head up, a few people glanced o...

  9. The Orphanage 10 (edited ficlet)

    Abigail and Aleena headed back to the house, while Sophia and Lucas, armed with the crowbar, stood watch over him. And Marco stayed back with Fay, she was still unconcious. Aleena headed to the kitchen for food, while Abigail went to the living room f...

  10. The Orphanage 9 (edited ficlet)

    He was not ready when they reached him. Aleena, Abigail, and Marco picked up Fay and headed back to the woods. Sophia punched him in the stomach and yelled “NOW HOW DO YOU LIKE IT ?!” Lucas raised the crowbar high over his head and brought it down...

  11. The Orphanage 8 (edited ficlet)

    “You know what this just got ya blondie?” he teased, swaying a little. Fay just glared, trying to hide all her fear. “It got ya six times the beaten, ya no why? Everyone else is GONE AND THERE WAS SIX OF YA’S!” He kicked her twice, hard...

  12. The Orphanage 7 (edited ficlet)

    Sophia was the last to make it into the woods. She bent down to catch her breath. Marco was looking at everyone with a worried expression, “Wait, where is Fay!?” Everyone looked around, not seeing her, they went to the edge of the woods, then each...

  13. The Orphanage 6 (edited ficlet)

    “Run for the woods!” Fay whispered, and she took off with the rest, falling behind a little, she wasn’t the fastest runner. They could all hear him yelling and cursing, then a door slamming, they were halfway there. Fay was running as fast as sh...

  14. The Orphanage 5 (edited ficlet)

    They served him his regular meal on Saturday, and they kept the drinks coming. He locked them up, then stumbled to his room. Then they sat, ready to go when they heard the music. There it was. Fay handed Sophia the crowbar and her and Marco wrenched t...

  15. The Orphanage 4 (edited ficlet)

    “OK, this Saturday when we make him dinner," Fay said, "we can get him drunk, and-” Abigail interrupted, “But he’s worse when he’s drunk! Why-” Fay shushed her. “Yes but he also goes to his room and blares music when he’s re...

  16. The Orphanage 3 (edited ficlet)

    “What do you mean, You’ve got it?” said Aleena slamming down the box, making Lucas jump, then he backed off a bit. "I mean, come here and I’ll show you, we’re getting out this time guys.” Fay said confidently. “Oh come on Fay, face...

  17. The Orphanage 2 (edited ficlet)

    They sat quietly in the room, they were all dirty, skinny, and had poor nutrition. Marco, (15) a blonde, tall boy hunched in the corner staring at nothing in particular. Sophia, (14) a strong, brave girl stood by the tiny window, looking out at the woo...

  18. The Orphanage 1 (edited ficlet)

    The room they were in was very dark, with the only light coming from one small candle at night, and a little window in the day. These children residing in this small, filthy, empty room were orphans, controlled by him. He was the owner of the orphanag...

  19. See you all at lunch

    “So, how are you?” He said, putting his arm around me as we started down the hallway for A-Block. “Well I woke up to my dog in my face and almost had a heart attack, but aside from that, I’m fine, at least I am now.” I ad...

  20. Good morning

    I kicked my locker again, cursing underneath my breath as I finally yanked it open. As I got my books, I was deafened by a loud squeal from my right. I looked over to see a group of cheerleaders flirting obnoxiously with some guys with perfect hair. &#...

  21. They were all doing something

    “You’ll be fine, they’re going to make it all heal and you’ll be good as new.” Will said, trying to sound positive. He leaned in and kissed me. Darrell walked up and put his hand on his shoulder, then took my hand, “...

  22. Whos fault it is should be the least of our worries right now

    “Well fine, don’t. But when this whole thing gets worse because you two are depressed over something that wasn’t your fault, don’t whine about it to me.” Anne said, in her usual stubborn tone. “I understand that this...

  23. I wish I believed you

    “How long has it been since,” I paused, " since it happened?" Darrell checked his watch, “About five hours.” They were all trying to hide the worry on their faces, they knew that stuff bothered me. “I know you gu...

  24. If you need me just press the button

    “He’s in the waiting room with all your friends.” My dad reassured me, “They are all very worried about you.” “Why can’t he be in here?” “Not that many people can be in here at a time.” Dr. H...

  25. I needed him there

    I didn’t know where I was, when I blinked my eyes open and looked over I saw my mom and dad talking to someone. She was holding a tissue in her hand and was crying like crazy. I realised it was a doctor and I was in the hospital. My dad looked ov...

  26. Shhh, everything is going to be fine

    I woke up and saw Mr. Jones holding something on my stomach. I turned to see Will kneeling by my side and holding my hand. I could tell that he had been crying. All my friends were standing around me too, they had been crying too. I opened my mouth to ...

  27. If I can't have you, no one can! (Mature)

  28. Whatever he had held in, snapped

    He wrapped his arms around my waist as I wrapped my arms around his shoulders. I felt like I was on top of the world. My heart skipped a beat when he leaned in and kissed me gently on the lips. Will swatted at Darrell with the camera again, “Fin...

  29. I Love My Friends

    We walked into the school and went into the gym, where the dance was held. I looked around and saw my best friend Anne, talking to Jake (her date) Natalie, Tyler and Kayla. Anne saw us and pointed us out to the crowd around her. Natalie and and Tyler s...

  30. Too many pictures!!

    The picture taking went on practically forever, Will was most likely just as annoyed as I was but he didn’t show it. I was so excited to finally be at the dance. He was such a gentlman helping me out of the car :) My dad said something about bein...

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