Haiku Challenge!!!

This challenge has ended!

You have a month to make up a haiku.
But, there is one requirement:
It MUST have some sort of twist at the end.
It doesn’t matter what it is, but it has to be surprising.
It could be funny, or disturbing. As long as it is surprising

For example:
He tends not to flinch
though I’m yelling in his ear
which is in my hand

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Challenge has ended

Thanks for participating!

The winner of this challenge is:

Blaze

Author: Copernicus

Challengers

  1. Blaze

    Author: Copernicus

  2. Summer

    Author: Barefoot Contessa

Discussion

  1. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    Copernicus is the only one who completed all the regulations….
    sorry ahaha

  2. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    OH WAIT DAMN.

    Contest over.

  3. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    Alright, I’m going to submit a few that I already published. Sorry, everyone, but they fit.

  4. Avatar TextMason

    Two writers enter! One writer leaves!
    Two writers enter! One writer leaves!

    (Or ignore me. I’m just such a troublemaker.)

  5. Avatar Barefoot Contessa

    oops, didn’t do that right XD

  6. Avatar Nancy

    Love the example in the challenge description.

  7. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    There, Stovo, I changed it

  8. Avatar Stovohobo

    What’s with all the challenges requiring sick endings/components? Not totally opposed to it, just don’t know if shock value has the same shocking quality after so many entries. Shrug.

    This probably sounds more aggressive than I meant it to.

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Participants

  • Copernicus
  • Barefoot Contessa