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Avatar Author: K-Jellybean You know that moment when you realize you're in over your head? "I am steeped in blood so far, that returning would be as tedious as going ahead." ***** I missed this place. I missed posting. I can't be the user that ... Read Bio

The Shepherd grinned and used his free hand to push away the offending cotton panties in his way. Jenna swallowed the bile that rose in her throat as his fingers brushed her sex. She closed her eyes, expecting pain and further degradation.

“Hey!”
“Look!”
“That guy’s being attacked!”
“Someone call the cops!”
“Look!”

Jenna opened her eyes to see the shocked and pained visage of the Shepherd two inches in front of her. A very furious Lauren had her teeth sunk, gums deep, in his throat. His grip on her tightened in his agony and Jenna clawed at his arm, desperately. Lauren ripped her teeth away, taking the flesh of his throat with her. Blood spurted from the wound and painted both their faces red. Lauren pushed him down, by his shoulders, to his knees before her. Jenna’s feet touched the ground and she swiped his hand away as his grip went slack with his death creeping near.

She grabbed his chin and forced him to look into her eyes. She bared her fangs for him and snarled, “This is what you deserve.”

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  1. Avatar Violet Turner

    The story has been very enjoyable so far. I’m just confused about these vampires – why are they afraid of the humans, when they are clearly more powerful??

  2. Avatar K-Jellybean

    It will be explained, but not just yet. Until then, think of it this way: there is strength in numbers.

    There are more humans than vampires. There will always be more humans [these vampires cannot reproduce]. The vampires may be stronger, but they are frightened by numbers, not strength of individuals.

  3. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Beautifully crafted.

  4. Avatar thelostgirl

    @ Sophia D’Soleil: I get it. It’s like in ‘30 Days of Night’ in which vampires have been in hiding so long no one believes that they still exist. They had to hide to survive or humans would have eradicated them long ago. We might not be as fast or as strong but as you say we outnumber them.
    Go go humankind!

  5. Avatar K-Jellybean

    In that sense, yes, but the vampires didn’t exist before… it’s kind of a long story, but that’s why I’m here: to tell it. :P

  6. Avatar maximumride36

    i love the story. really good. i love vampire stories. idk why, i just do, and i think that your story rocks. so please write another. PLEASE! =D

  7. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Lolz, thanks very much—I will; promise.

  8. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    GO VAMPS!

    Kill the SHEP.

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