Childhood's End

Avatar Author: Bob Liddil I am an author of science fiction, general fiction short stories, poetry, and non-fiction. I have been published in several genres, including fantasy and poetry, as well as non fiction. At one time I published my own c... Read Bio

My grandmother believed she could see the future. The future she saw for me, the summer I turned seventeen, was to be shot to death in the jungle in an obscure country called Viet Nam. The dream frightened her so badly that she took to her bed for a week.

The choices facing a kid like me in the fall of 1964 were threefold; college, volunteer or The Draft. It was the latter that my grandmother feared so much. Even though we were not heavily entrenched in Southeast Asia in ’64, she believed an Army draft notice would result in my obituary.

All through the fall of that year, my grandmother and I fought, her insisting that I join the Navy, and me desperately clinging to high school and not wanting to drop out. It was a tumultuous time for our family.

In November, she signed me in. It wasn’t like leaving for summer camp. My adult life officially began on a DC3 headed to Chicago and Great Lakes Naval Training Center. 9 weeks later I was on a train to my first duty post in Florida.

So ended my childhood.

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  1. Avatar PJ (Jae) [[LoA]]

    I did not see this coming. I love the way you interpreted the challenge. And Kudos for well researched writing!

  2. Avatar Paige Elizabeth

    I liked this one a lot. This was oddly familiar though in no way my own experience. Well done!

    Comment: The opening sentence seemst awkward. I think it’s the verb tense “was believed she could see” . Perhaps omit the word was.

  3. Avatar Bob Liddil

    The “was” was a typo, left over from an edited sentence which originally read, “My grandmother was psychic.”

    You caught the typo I missed Thanks :)

    And thanks for reading

  4. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    War brings out the \adult monster in us all…

  5. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Such an abrupt ending, like a door closing, as I am sure and experience like this would be! Accurate portrayal, I am sure. :) Interesting that she still sent you, though.. I’d have thought she’d advocate for college.

  6. Avatar Bob Liddil

    She was afraid of the marines and the army, having lost a son in law in one and a cousin in the other in WWII.

    College wasn’t much of an option for the poor and illacademic in the Vietnam era. :)

  7. Avatar Marli

    I knew a lot of guys who had the same childhood abrupt withdrawal. Nam. Bam. Some did come home. But most scattered .

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