Perfect Day (II)

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Shortly after we arrived at this ideal scene, we noticed the odd behavior of the animals. Looking again at the landscape around us, the sight shifted slightly. The sky was a blinding blue, the sun a harsh yellow, the water a frigid clear. The duck gazed with to-much-to-be-normal curiosity and the trees bent to wood-splintering angles. Thinking as one, we made a hegira to the park entrance only to find that the gates we had broken through were once again hermetic.

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  1. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    A little short, but descriptive. A little lost on what’s going on, but good nonetheless.

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Perfect Day (I) by .:Band Baby:.