Reflections

Avatar Author: Radical Yellow Duck Ok, I'm back. One heart attack, a triple CABG (Coronary Artery Bypass Graft, pronounced cabbage) and two sessions of beating my computer into submission. I am back. I'm old. Real old. I'm so old I remember when dial... Read Bio

Riding back to my hotel, with a bottle full of pain pills in my pocket could have been more comfortable if I had taken one or two. But I needed my wits about me instead of being in a drug induced haze. I kept on thinking back to Michael.

I thought I knew him. He might be a bit of a rogue and a scoundrel, but I remembered him as having some kind of moral compass. Yes, he would smuggle. He could smuggle anything. Cigarettes, alcohol, medicines, even people. He got weapons to those that needed them. Always making a profit, because with out profit, nothing moved.

Something must have changed. Something that I just didn’t understand.

The taxi dropped me off at the hotel. And I went up to my room. The pain in my arm was killing me, so I took one of the tablets and laid down. When I closed my eyes the sunlight was shining into the room through the window.

The phone rang and woke me up to darkness. I reached for the phone with my good hand. It was Rashida. She had to talk to me, tonight. She gave me an address.

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  1. Avatar GreatNorthWoodsGirl

    I think I’d lose the part about him being a scoundrel. After saying he’s a rogue it sounds redundant. People don’t use scoundrel much anymore either. Sounds too old-fashioned for this modern story.
    Grammar Girl strikes: drug and induced should have a hyphen between them.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    and without is one word :)
    rogue is devious, a ninja, and mostly it means he operates alone, not affiliated with others, but scoundrel is mean and two faced and underhanded, they are not the same. I think you need both.

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