What I Wish Would Happen (Part V: You Are Everything)

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An alarm bell is clanging somewhere in my head. I ignore it. It continues to blare. She doesn’t really love you. You’re just second best. I am reluctant to react. It takes all the self-control I possess to tear myself away from her.
“What is it?” she asks. “What’s wrong?”
“What about her? Sam?”
Her eyebrows furrow and she frowns at me. “…Who?” She looks genuinely puzzled.
We are both silent while I let her words sink in. Finally, I speak. “The other girl. The one you love.”
She grips my shoulders and looks into my eyes. “Anna, I don’t know what you’re talking about. You’re the only girl I could ever love.” Her eyes are open and honest. I am simultaneously confused and overjoyed.
“W-what? But… but you said… you said that I…”
“Shhhh…” She places a finger on my lips. “I don’t know what I said. I can’t even remember yesterday. You… you’ve filled me up…everywhere. I don’t…. you’re everything now.”
“…I am?” I can barely whisper. She nods, and I can feel the love in her eyes.
“So are you.”

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  1. Avatar Mr.Gabriel


    She’s only distracting you to get some action, then when you wake up in the morning, she won’t even be civil enough to leave a note and you’ll be wondering were she went, only to find out by a threaten phone call from Sam that they moved to a different part of town because Jane said you tried raping her and they’ll press charges if you follow them, so you’ll end up crying your eyes out because you never forgive yourself for falling for her evil tricks and you end up not fully trusting any other girl again, so you end up lonely and unhappy for the rest of your life.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    hahahahaha gabe’s comment!
    sweet ending, though. :)

  3. Avatar Catherine

    Umm I don’t know about Gabe’s comment but i too find it hard to believe she just forgot about the other girl, but I really liked this series :)

  4. Avatar Mackizme

    Haha, wow Gabe, the whole point of this series is that it’s a fantasy. It clearly wouldn’t happen in real life, and if it did, things would have gone differently. Read the title, for pete’s sake! :D

  5. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Heh. Well, I assumed some part of it had to be a fact. But hey, that’s just me.

  6. Avatar Mackizme

    Nope, no facts here. All dreams and fantasy.

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