Of Dust and Gears

Avatar Author: Nathaniel Payne I'm just a guy that likes to write. Mainly science fiction and a little light fantasy. I also like to play video games and spend time with my awesome family. I'm currently working on a 365 challenge! I will attempt to ... Read Bio

Glennen knelt wearily over his demolished creation. There was nothing recognizable remaining of the perfect, beautiful angel he had crafted. Even its gossamer silk wings had shredded to nothingness.

“Next time, I expect better work,” the princess sneered. “This toy was obviously far too fragile.”

Glennen’s hands were shaking.

“You monster,” he said. He stood and pointed a quaking finger at her royal highness. “You inconsiderate and ungrateful monster!”

“How dare you speak to me in such a tone!” the incredulous princess retorted.

“I will speak to you in a manner befitting what you truly are — a child! A spoiled and irresponsible child!”

“It’s just a statue,” the princess said angrily. “You can make another.”

“You don’t seem to understand,” Glennen whispered. “I could never make an angel to match it, even given another seventeen years. That precious angel was imbued with magic bestowed from your saintly mother and father. It was meant to house your eternal soul. And without it, you will surely die.”

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  1. Avatar ReynoldsEco

    Three stories, two characters, one angel – and with it you’ve crafted an entire world with a mysterious conflict made into a threat by the arrogance of a princess. Truly nice work. Although she destroyed an angel Glennen spent 17 years making, so she totally deserves whatever’s coming.

  2. Avatar kaellinn18

    Ouch, I did not see that coming. It serves her right, though.

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