Expand Your View

Avatar Author: Concerned Reader I ain't a writer right now, and I probably wont be one in the future, but I sure as hell enjoy the act of writing. I've only just started writing in the past few years, and even then have only produced short stories and s... Read Bio

You ever have one of those days?
Where it all just falls away?
You get down to the basis of it, and realize that you just suck?

Now it’s not the end of the world,
As your life is being unfurled.
You just have to settle down, and step off of your high horse.

Perhaps you’re not the best.
No better than all the rest.
But if you were, would you really keep on trying?

I guess what I mean is this:

Do you really think it’s wise,
if you listen to all their lies,
if they detract from whatever it is you want to do?

But if what they speak is true,
Then listen, and expand your view.
Do this, and pretty soon you’ll be doing alright.

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  1. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Lovely message, and I like how it is a little disorganized, like you’re thinking it through. Neat meter for the poem as well.

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