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Avatar Author: Gradual Uprising {LoA} Hi. I am a 17-year-old, American student. My full name is Drew Michael Klopfer. I am an Ohioan. Go Bucks! Please feel free to give me constructive criticism. It's good for me. I'm the League of Awesomenness's SeƱor del Su... Read Bio

Where was I? Oh yes, John Baker was running away from an East-side gang. To this day, I don’t know why. Now, this was a year after graduation. I’d heard through rumors that John had hit rock-bottom. Not that I did any better. I continued being Granville’s paperboy, ha. More like paperman. The last person to have seen him in town was Sylvia Gold after she stripped him of everything he owned in their divorce.

They were catching up on John, when he ran out into the street, which by coincidence, I happened to be driving down that very night. The tires on my black cadillac screeched as they fought with the downhill slope. He recognized me at once.

Let me in!” he screamed while beating on one of the doors. I counted five, big, scary men and decided to unlock the door. He jumped in, slammed the door, and locked it.

Four of the guys blocked my way. “Where’s the other guy?” I asked with no response from John.

I accelerated.

The druggies dodged, but a loud thud under my back tires answered my question.

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Comments (2 so far!)

  1. Avatar Mostly Harmless

    I really don’t know where the twist is going to be! I don’t even really know there’ll be one at all!

    Either way, this is neat storytelling – a little disjointed perhaps, but nonetheless intriguing… Reading on! MH :)

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    yeah slightly disjointed, but told in the fashion of a real storyteller recounting his past.

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So, you want to know the story of my death. Well, John tried to light his cigarette while running away from a gang of knife-wielding druggies...

Black Cadillac by Gradual Uprising {LoA}