Creeping Up the Back Stairs

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The party upstairs was in full swing, the bump-bump-bump of the music audible even from outside.

In the darkness on the back stairs, a shadow moved. The form had almost no shape; it moved like liquid. It climbed each step with meticulous care, coalescing itself before pushing its turgid form upward to grab the lip of the next step.

As it climbed, it left an unbroken strand of itself behind, a connection to something as yet unseen in the gloom beyond. Its progress was slow, but inexorable.

It reached the summit and paused, gathering itself and pulsing gently in time with the beat of the music inside. With each pulse it grew, siphoning more of itself upward until it filled the landing.

The span of a human heartbeat — and it surged under the door with alarming speed, invading the space within. What moments before was a festive celebration took but seconds to dissolve into terror and screaming.

The screaming ended far, far too quickly.

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  1. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    This story was, strangely enough, inspired by the song “Creepin’ Up the Back Stairs” by The Fratellis. Don’t ask me how I got this story from that song because I honestly don’t know. :)

  2. Avatar Robert Quick

    I like it. A lot. I’m new here but this strikes me as something to strive towards. Good work! I also don’t know what ‘turgid’ means so I am about to learn a new word today too!

  3. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Awesome! I’m always happy to introduce people to new words.

    And welcome to Ficly! I’m relatively new here, as well, but I’m greatly enjoying the experience.

  4. Avatar The Third Robot

    I agree with Mr. Quick. Turgid is a solid word. Same with coalesced.

    In other news, this story was bad-ass.

  5. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    The thesaurus is a wonderful tool. I refer to it frequently when I’m writing. :)

  6. Avatar Adam Susskind

    I like this one a lot. Nice diction!

  7. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Excellent use of that thesaurus. You don’t see inexorable in stories very often. I especially liked the ending on this one.

  8. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Thanks, Adam!

    Ah, yes – ‘inexorable.’ One of my very favorite words. :-D

  9. Avatar Horrorfan13

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. The descriptions are wonderful. I keep picturing flubber, but this is definitely its evil cousin. Wonderful!

  10. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Thank you! Flubber was on my mind, as well, as I was writing this. :)

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