Gone

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All the time,
That will pass,
Never fine,
Broken Glass.

All the hurt,
All the pain,
On alert,
Keep me sane.

Best of friends,
So much trust,
To the end,
It’s a must.

Now you leave,
Icy tears,
I must grieve,
Do repairs.

Now you’re gone,
Faraway,
I move on,
In dismay.

Up’s and down’s,
Always here,
Spin around,
I’m held dear.

By the one,
You protest,
Yes he won,
The final test.

When you ran,
He was here,
Better man -
He was near.

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  1. Avatar In Night's Arms

    Me as I read this
    Aww Brii needs a hug ;(

  2. Avatar In Night's Arms

    Haha I forgot to rate it ;)

  3. Avatar someday_93

    This is very pretty, almost lyrical…I like it =]

  4. Avatar Brebelles {LoA}

    When I wrote it, I wrote it to a 3/4 count.

  5. Avatar someday_93

    That’s cool. Are you a musician then?

  6. Avatar Brebelles {LoA}

    I am sort of.

  7. Avatar Judith Burton

    I love the rythmic beat. I like how you can feel your emotion too.

  8. Avatar Brebelles {LoA}

    Thanks Judith :)