Mad. (pt 4)

Avatar Author: StudMuffin (LoA) I'm 20. I live in Hastings, UK. Uhhh I'm going to school for illustration, but sometimes I just, like, love writing. Back when I was 15, I was a member of this site in it's earliest days and I stopped using it after ... Read Bio

The policeman stood up, “Is everything okay?”

“No! No, the fuckin’ stain is moving. Look at it. Look at it! It’s getting.. it’s getting bigger. Oh Jesus. Oh Christ. Oh God,” he was backing away, pointing his left index at the stain on the wall, now at least thrice it’s original size, “God. Oh God, Oh God. Please, Please (nametag) Charles. Please, get me out of this room, I’ll confess. I did it. I’m sorry.”

The policeman, who had for reasons beyond him taken on the name Charles looked at where Ray was pointing.
The white wall. Not a mark.
“Ray. What stain?”

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  1. Avatar Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

    Oh, dear. I often think the tv set is moving but thats my eyes I think…

  2. Avatar Le Héros Tragique

    Good entry. =^) Not only a high anxiety situation, but the obsessing about the stain was a good touch.

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