As She Falls

Avatar Author: StudMuffin (LoA) I'm 20. I live in Hastings, UK. Uhhh I'm going to school for illustration, but sometimes I just, like, love writing. Back when I was 15, I was a member of this site in it's earliest days and I stopped using it after ... Read Bio

Tears form as I watch her fall.

Smoke pours from the barrel.

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  1. Avatar Tad Winslow

    This has a poetic quality. For me, I like echos or reacurrences of words and sounds wherever I can find them, and I found a few here that are subtle. For example— ‘form’ and ‘from’. Both lines end in L. There is a recurring presence of r sounds. I know that has nothing to do with the story, but it just adds to the readability and texture of what you’re telling us, and that’s the sort of weird stuff I notice and like.