I Doth Bestow A Wee Bit of Competition (Milkshake Challenge)

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The Clopping Goat was busier than usual this late morn. Villagers roamed around outside waiting to get a table. My pub was emptied and I was quite furious.
I stomped over and lurked outside the back alley of the establishment. An aproned woman elbowed her way out of the backdoor.
“Pray tell, why dost ye have so many patrons?” I asked the matron who carried three pitchers to the well.
“Mine milkshake dost bring all the menfolk to the yard and verily ’tis better than thine!” she boasted.
“A milk- shake?” I queried, confused. “Ye shake the milk?”
“I might teach thee, but I’d have to levee a tidy fee.” She laughed and hurried off.

I would have to try this milk-shake. Perhaps the fee would be worth it.

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  1. Avatar OrangeOreos (LoA)

    Hahahahaha!!!
    Not what I was expecting, at all! I lol’d.

  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Hilarious redux on the challenge material. I had no idea what was going on right up until the milkshake line. I think I’ve grown to appreciate the subtlety with which challenge entries are labeled.

  3. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    i should have made my title more indicative.. like “I Doth Bestow A Wee Bit of Competition (milkshake challenge)”

  4. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    there, how’s that?

  5. Avatar Oy

    Way… Unique from all of the other entries XD

  6. Avatar beatnik307

    Oh, oh my.

  7. Avatar Ronnie

    Very cute. You write the dialogue very convincingly for the time.

  8. Avatar gĀ²LaPianistaIrlandesa

    XD This, Elsha, has made my review-weary day. Nice way to twist around the lines!

  9. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    @Ronnie.. Thanx, I have a very well-read source.. :P

  10. Avatar noobgoldberg

    Verily, thy failure to attribute said sources is… troubling.
    http://moronail.net/img/590_My_Milkshake_Bringeth_All_Ye_Gentlefolk_To_The_bayeux_tapestry

  11. Avatar Druhim

    This seemed really trite to me. Half of the text is needless detail setting up a joke that’s just a pop hit rephrased in fake olde english.

  12. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    thanks noogoldberg! I hadn’t seen that! actually, my husband had seen someone type up the lines in a forum. I just made up a backstory. :)

  13. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    @druhim, that was the idea! The challenge was to use the lines, I found this amusing..

  14. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080722040010AAAiTA4

    here is a person who claims to have invented them..

  15. Avatar AccidentalRob|LoA|

    Tis wonderful… lo, verily ye have brought a smile to mine lips.

  16. Avatar blusparrow (LoA)

    hahaha! this is funny!

  17. Avatar penguincaptain

    this is great!!! very funny and very different from the rest. didn’t see that coming at all.

  18. Amj Lone Writer

    This makes me laugh! Definitely one of my favorites!

  19. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    you are a freakin nut