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Severed Rhymes Redux (cont'd)

Avatar Author: Yuriy Zubovski I am a physicist, atheist, collaborative writer, poet, graphic artist, web designer, and Delt. I've written quite a few stories that are ripe for reading, sequeling, prequeling, and commenting, if you're so inclined. ... Read Bio

But once is not enough. Tis but a dream
That fleets for good for me to never see.
You surely know the feelings in my heart
That for a moment’s kiss my kingdom goes to thee!
If only would you give that chance
Where when I carry you aweigh across my chest
Clear of your sea of troubles, in crisp air
You sigh relief and smile so I may rest
And know that love extends both ways.
For does it? I bring you remedy for any ail
Or when I pay your troubles into naught
Do you respond with equal action or with stale
Generic answers? I am distraught -
I know that all I do is of my own accord
But I am powerless to stop, to let you go
For if I give you up can I forgive myself?
Can I give up the feelings that I’ll never know?

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Severed Rhymes Redux by Yuriy Zubovski

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