The Wedding Victim

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He approaches.
Her screams are shrill.
He grabs something.
She is still.

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  1. Avatar Horrorfan13

    I like the ambiguity of this, but I couldn’t tell it was about a wedding victim except for the title. I’m not sure how hard and fast the rules are for the challenge, but I still like it! Almost poetic.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    i say she fainted, but the ‘she’ could be anybody, not necessarily a bride.

  3. Avatar Elizabeth

    I meant that she died (he grabbed a knife), but I wanted it to be 12 words and I guess be a little ambiguous,

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