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Lean on Me

Avatar Author: Robert Quick A no-name, aspiring author who can't stop writing. Looking ahead, he strives for perfection. Shackled by various forms of entertainment, he dreams of success. Most stories here are an invitation to YOU, to join me in cre... Read Bio

“Man, swallow your pride! How am I supposed to know you need help if you won’t tell me?” I yelled over the roar of rushing air. It was a hot, dry heat and the open windows on the truck didn’t do much of anything but it was better than nothing.

My friend Chris looked at me, holding the sullen expression on his face. His mouth opened into an ‘O’ as the truck became airborne, riding on a brown mushroom of dirt and dust.

That was the last thing I remembered before waking up.

I heaved a cough through what felt like a screen of sand in my lungs.

We stopped moving.

A shadow blocked the sun. “You awake? Good, I was tired of dragging your ass.” I recognized Chris’ voice.

“What happened?” I asked weakly.

“I.E.D. trashed the truck and banged us up pretty bad. Lucked out with a premature detonation.”

“Don’t feel lucky.” I coughed.

“C’mon let me help you up. You’re going to have to lean on me, we got a lot of ground to cover.”

“Thanks, man. I owe you one.”

“Don’t mention it- this is what real friends do.”

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Comments (3 so far!)

  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Great now that song is going to be stuck in my head.. and since I can sign it, the motions too.

  2. Avatar Emilou

    I really like the last line. : ) I think it would be awesome if you were to make it more obvious that they are in the military earlier in the story, because then it would have a lot more of an impact, and then the bomb makes sense.

  3. Avatar Music-Hearted

    This is really nice, and I love this song. I agree with Emilou that some more hints about the military would be nice, but good job!