The Case of Conner Black

Avatar Author: Francis James This is my redemption My last battle My last fight My last dying dream This is where it ends I will write one last story and then my dream of a writer shall no longer exist I plan to go more towards cooking th... Read Bio

Detective Jones resisted his case to the court room. He attempted to present it as best as he could. To finally be able to give the small community of Boulder Creek the peace it deserved.

Conner sat facing the detective smiling at him, and grinning with every word Jones spoke about him and what he was being charged for.

Conner drew pictures in his note book of children playing in a school yard; he drew the boys jerking off to the girls as they were tied to the swings. He also drew pictures of parents in cars mutilated.

Conner was arrested in the summer of 1986, for the brutal murders of 7 young boys in the community of Boulder Creek. The police found the 7 boys nailed to a piece of dry wall. The police determined that they were alive when Conner gutted them open and placed there intestines in each of their mouths then he placed their testicles in the eye sockets. He then drilled a hole in their skulls, were he inserted his penis.

The coroner found that some of the kids were still alive through it.

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  1. Avatar Richard Hinds

    Very brutal, man, just brutal. Not sure I take anything away from this other than shock value, but hey, whatever you like to write, write it.

    One thing – you should check spelling… “coroner” and “through” are misspelled in the last sentence.

  2. Avatar Construct of a Mind

    Also, in addition to Mr. Hinds comment, it was supposed to be placed in a fantasy setting.

    Just saying.

  3. Avatar Francis James

    This story is based in a fantasy setting. Your probably confusing fantasy with every science fiction shows and movies out there, but this is a story of fiction and in a fantasy setting.

  4. Avatar Krulltar

    First let me state that the horror genre is one of my favorite…I enjoy everthing from HP Lovecraft to Clive Barker, Ambroise Bierce to Stephen King. This fell flat for me because it explictedly stated the gore. Lovecraft said, “Never state an horror when it can be suggested.” Another thing is that there was no motive or suggest plot device that caused Conner to do what he did.

    Unfortunately I’m going to give you one of my rare one pencil ratings… 1st for unnecessary gore, and 2nd for not meeting the requirements of fantasy for the challenge

  5. Avatar Krulltar

    Your defintion of fantasy is wrong…

    According to Wikipedia on the Fantasy Genre: “Fantasy is a genre that uses magic and other supernatural phenomena as a primary element of plot, theme, and/or setting.”

  6. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Brutal story!

    Your use of ‘resisted’ in the first sentence is wrong. I think you meant to something synonymous with ‘presented’.

    The last sentence of the first paragraph is also a sentence fragment.

    I’d contest your definition of the fantasy genre. In fiction, ‘fantasy’ has a very specific meaning, as Krulltar has already pointed out.

    That said, I really enjoyed the visceral nature of this story. My kind of fiction!

  7. Avatar cthulhuburger

    Shock for its own value. It reminds me of the “torture-porn” genre of films like “Hostel” and “The Hills Have Eyes,” and that’s not a good thing.

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