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The Last Mariachi (Fin)

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The ground’s mist mirrored my mind’s panic as I ran. I lost track of whether I had passed that damned shack… 4, maybe 5 times?

The music which had calmed me only a short time ago now grated itself across my ears like a cat’s tongue. I tried running perpendicular to the road, risking the chance of getting lost in the desert, but I only returned to the same spot.

I glanced upwards and found that moon hadn’t shifted in the sky one iota. Spent, I plunked down on the ground to try to collect myself. It wasn’t a simple task, with the constant invasion of the strumming from that old guitar.

‘Da Capo’… I looked at the sign curiously. That wasn’t spanish… The phrase wandered around in my head and finally connected with my old high-school band lessons. ‘Da Capo’… Repeat from beginning.

With a giggle of desperation, I grabbed a nearby piece of white rock. Beneath the existing phrase I scratched the words ‘al coda’ and set off toward my destination, the music fading one last time.

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  1. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    The musician in me loves this triplet of stories. Bravo, sir! Bravo!

  2. Avatar Paige Elizabeth

    I loved this. It made me think of violin lessons.

  3. Avatar Tesseract

    Heh. Wasn’t meant to be a triplet, but I’m pleased with how it evolved. Didn’t plan the second when I wrote the first nor the third when I wrote the second. :D

    Glad you guys approve. ^^d

  4. Avatar southsideof10

    Really enjoyed all three stories. The music theme was great and I loved the repetitive once I realized it was intentional. I will say that ‘iota’ and ‘plunked’ don’t seem to match the flavor or language of the rest of the story. A minor speedbump in an otherwise eerily wonderful story.

  5. Avatar Mystic Dolphin

    This was really good!!! Really entertaining. I was looking for a one pager though, not three :o way to go all out :P In my opinion this was definitely a real hard choice. Good job and thanks for participating!

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