Awakening

Avatar Author: Seb Feast My name is Seb Feast. I'm a student, born January 28th 1995. I live in England (born and raised). I'm an avid gamer and a regular on this here internet. My xbox live gamer tag is Captain EVA. I enjoy writing and using my ... Read Bio

As I lay in the blood stained catacombs of my mind, I entered a state of sheer peacefulness. I felt alone; my once thriving world had been silenced by a simple ‘mishap’. But despite my pain I found happiness amongst this desolation. Where? I searched and searched but there was nothing but emptiness.

I felt…disappointed, maybe. I think I died but I simply stayed there paralysed in my thoughts. I still can’t tell you exactly why I was happy. I just accepted the fact. Thinking back, it was entirely rational to feel scared and angry and almost every other negative emotion. Maybe my viewpoint is different now.

I managed to find the energy to open up one final memory, and as I gazed into her glowing eyes for one last time, I fell deeply asleep and started to dream. Turns out death isn’t as bad as it’s made out to be. Maybe it’s now that I’m truly awake.

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  1. Avatar Je suis

    Wow, Seb I didn’t know you wrote so well :D

  2. Avatar Je suis

    Wow, Seb I didn’t know you wrote so well :D

  3. Avatar Je suis

    Wow, Seb I didn’t know you wrote so well :D

  4. Avatar Je suis

    Wow, Seb I didn’t know you wrote so well :D

  5. Avatar Je suis

    Wow, Seb I didn’t know you wrote so well :D

  6. Avatar Seb Feast

    Neither did I :D Thanks ^^

  7. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    It’s a good start! Welcome to Ficly! :)

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