Too Far

Avatar Author: Concerned Reader I ain't a writer right now, and I probably wont be one in the future, but I sure as hell enjoy the act of writing. I've only just started writing in the past few years, and even then have only produced short stories and s... Read Bio

I’m sorry, I didn’t know you felt this way.
I’m sorry, I didn’t think it’d end this way.

If I’d known how you were feeling, I’d have stopped right away.
If I’d known the thoughts you were thinking, I’d have kept away.

So please, put the gun away.
Please, put my fears at bay.

It was never meant to go this far.
I never thought you’d go this far.

I realize now, we treated you wrong,
I realize now, we came on too strong.

But is my life worth the hell to pay,
If you go on and take it away?

Is this the revenge you so desperately need?
Put a bullet in my head, leave my body to bleed?

I’m sorry, I didn’t know you felt this way.
Please don’t let it end this way.

I realize now, we treated you wrong,
I realize now, we came on too strong.

I never thought you’d go this far.

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  1. Avatar Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

    This is painful. It’s good to see you stray from your norm. The repetition, the simplicity, it shows the desperation of the situation but it doesn’t feel too cliche.

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