Cancellation of Forces

Avatar Author: Tesseract Writing with many facets. I've been dabbling in the Art of the Word for well over 15 years. If you leave a rating, kindly leave comments as well. What am I doing right? What am I doing wrong? You can help me grow. ... Read Bio

The stars hold motionless in the sky
no ground beneath my feet
I remain in perfect suspension.

Frozen between up and down
in Lagrangian torpor
I’ve nothing to do but wait.

Resigned myself to fate
one which will surely bore
long before I drown.

No rescue of which to mention
this isolation complete
kept alive until I die.

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  1. Avatar Tesseract

    Hmmm… Wanted to try something different with how rhyming lines are put together. It makes sense visually, but not verbally. Ah well.

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