Chased

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Despair!

The thought crossed her mind wordlessly. The monsters were chasing her again.

Run away! Hide!

She reached with her senses, trying to find someplace to hide. Deep deep, find the deep!

Always chasing, they followed her, smelling of blood.

Despair!

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  1. Avatar Mostly Harmless

    Having read the whole series – it’s epic in scale, but needs an injection of pace, and character…

    This latest entry seems to certainly pick up pace, and could it also be introducing a new character?

    Not a lot to it, and I think you mean ‘they’ instead of ‘the’ in the fifth line, but considering you’re coming back to this after several months, I’ll be interested to look out for where this goes… MH :)

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