Murder of Being

Avatar Author: Jim Stitzel I dabble a little in a lot of things -- writing, webcomics, gaming, photography, web design, music, and more. I'm a full-time code-wrangler and a part-time farmer with 40 acres, a lot of animals, and far, far too much to do. Read Bio

His voice is grating and gravelly, a hint of squeak smelted into the forged metal of it. It gives his voice a distinctive timbre as he says into my ear, “I hope you bleed out, you little fucker.”

And as the man in the leather mask pulls six inches of Bowie knife from my gut, I realize that I recognize that voice. I have heard it many, many times over the course of my life.

I recognize that voice — because it is my own.

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  1. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Marked ‘mature’ simply because of the one word.

  2. Avatar Luke Nicolaou

    Whoa…. You definitely are the master if the macabre :D

    Care to extend on this a little more by any chance?? I want to find out more!

  3. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    I may, but feel free to expand it, as well. This little bit was really all the further the vision went in my mind, so I don’t even know much more than this. :)

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