Great visual!
Liked: He felt like he had accumulated dirt from the whole of the Empire and the urge to scrub it gone with hardy, scented soap(s) was strong. (don’t need the s)

Not sure you need an entire paragraph talking about his need to get clean. Most guys don’t think too much about it. lol

I had intended that there be multiple soaps available for use, but as I never specified, I have truncated the s. As far as his need to be clean, even men notice after a while. It just has to be RANK.