One

Avatar Author: Riley itty bitty writer from humble beginnings. find me: - http://ficlatte.com/authors/Riley - http://figment.com/users/267679-M-K- Read Bio

One voice,

made of many,

ringing from the walls,

the floors,

the hearts.

Beating voices,

plume from,

the maws,

of the

land-bound,

Sirens.

A box,

of assorted chocolates,

full of,

imperfect,

voices,

combining,

creating a,

joyous,

Harmony.

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  1. Avatar Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

    Beautiful. You show a lot of skill here with the rhythm of what you write.
    You overuse commas though. It doesn’t have to be that each line ends with a comma, as by creating a new line there is a more natural, more subtle pause. When writing free verse like this where each line flows on from another, use punctuation as you would in prose.

    Still marvellous though :)

  2. Avatar Kihd

    Micky! Talent! Sheesh!

    I love the chocolate box full of imperfect voices part, that is an interesting little metaphor, I think it’s called. I’m guessing it’s a choir? :)
    Call me crazy, but I think your poetry is waay better than your prose (not like your prose isn’t great though.).

  3. Avatar Kihd

    Oh DUUUUUUUUURR… IT’S IN THE TAGS! FRICK!

  4. Avatar Sir Bic

    ONE-derful!

    Micky, your poetry makes me hungry for more. First we had a Sundae, now a box of chocolates! I think I gained weight just reading this. []o)

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