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Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing volutpat.

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  1. Avatar SlangSkald

    The word is “its.”

    This does not manage to convey a story, an emotion or even a sensation particularly well. It’s just meaningless.

  2. Avatar J.M.V.

    Come on, at least give it a fair shot.

    Brevity is good, even extreme brevity, but it’s no excuse for a lack of content.

  3. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Yeah, I know that feeling. Still, I think SlangSkald’s point is that it could use some more to it than just that.