Very different version of ’don’t jump’. A fun read with lots of action and some explode-y stuff. I liked the little aside about the lycra or nothing as super hero gear. “If he’d taken the whole suit of armor.” is a fragment and could easily be put as a clause on the following sentence. Fun stuff though with a great cliffhanger ending.

Yeah, that bit was a mistake that’s now been corrected. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.