The Following Ficly Takes Place Between 3:00 AM and 4:00 AM

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03:03:27 AM

Eyes open. Ears open. Mouth closed. Nose clean. As Sara dozed cocooned in the sleeping bag, Randall scanned the surrounding forest for any sign of trouble. There wasn’t a lot he actually could see, aside from the shadows of the treetops, but every hoot, click, snap, and rustle reached his ears. He smelled the sweetness of pine sap. The forest was alive and Randall swore he’d be ready for anything.

Eyes open. Ears open. Mouth closed. Nose clean. Randall would never admit this to anyone, but he was feeling an exhaustion that exceeded anything he’d ever felt. He found himself wondering, How do they do this without sleeping? He glanced at a nearby tree. Or going to the bathroom?

Eyes open. Ears open. Mouth closed. Nose clean. Randall slapped himself back to alertness. Jas— Jack needs us, he thought. Randall needed something to busy his mind. He decided his math homework would do the trick.


Eyes open. Ears open. Mouth clooossszzzz….

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Comments (7 so far!)

  1. Avatar thebetweenspace

    Awesomeness. Even the strongest delusion cracks and I love the references to lack of sleep and needing to use the bathroom.

  2. Avatar Minion

    Really good!
    I’m not sure if you meant to do this, but 30-6≠25
    the math nerd in me is coming out XD

  3. Avatar BARomero

    @Meep: I was hoping someone would pick up that Randall screwed up on the math. ;-)

  4. Avatar BARomero

    …And this just gave me an idea to tweak the equation a little bit…

  5. Avatar BARomero

    Okay, new equation. Solve for x. ;-)

  6. Avatar smdasilva {LoA}


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