My Smokey Tomb

Avatar Author: The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA} It's amazing where life can take you. I always find myself coming back here though. My writing if you look at it chronologically has been steadily maturing, hopefully it turns into something inspiring. I call myself "The ... Read Bio

Sitting in an empty room
Choking on the fumes
My loves been gone
I’ve carried on
But why am I still choking
Its like my first time smoking
I need a drink
Sometime to think
But my mind always comes up empty…
It’s like there’s something missing
Amidst this reminiscing…

The smoke clears
But not the fears
She took something from me…
I guess I just need-

Someone to love me

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  1. Avatar The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

    I’ve never smoked or drinked… But lol I think it fit the mood right. I understand my rhyming schemes not the best… But it never has been.. Never will probably.

    My poems are like fragmented parts of a broken melody. It’s not supposed to run smoothly.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Will your love return? you seem to hold hope for her..

  3. Avatar The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

    No hope. Only bad memories.

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