much too

Avatar Author: Señor Carpín There will be time to prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet. Read Bio

your hands are much too cold to touch
and your blood is much too slick
your heart is much too fragile
and your bones are much too thick

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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    you should continue this. there is a story here.

  2. Avatar cthulhuburger

    Both pithy and melancholy. It has a good punch and does not overstay its welcome. I don’t know if I’m describing a wine or a poem, but maybe this poem is like wine? I like it.