The Corpse of a Girl.

Avatar Author: Dear, Vanessa; I'm a 17 year old Canadian lesbian residing in Ontario. This is just a place for me to share my thoughts, I have many of them stored in my head although not all of them are beautiful. Read Bio

Anger rippling through me like a fucking tidal wave. I feel it’s sharp talons digging into my chest. I can’t see or breathe anything except the abundance of fierce emotion that has blinded any rational thought from entering my poisonous mind.

I would love nothing more than to plunge my piercing claws deep into my torso and rip out my heart; the source of every single emotion that is vibrating through this thing that they call a body.

This is no human body, this is no human girl. This is nothing but a rotting corpse overflowing with a torrent of revulsion, animosity, hostility and venom.

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  1. Avatar meep

    Even when you’re violently frustrated you can still write beautifully. Very nice.

    “This is no human body, this is no human girl.”
    You deal with emotions so well in your writing.

  2. Avatar Dear, Vanessa;

    I jsut lveo you so mcuh

  3. Avatar Reaver19

    Love your ferocity in this one. It’s so angry I could scream!!!

  4. Avatar Dear, Vanessa;

    Haha well I’m glad! Because I was feeling pretty angry when I wrote it :)

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