Adam and Eve [Disturbing Challenge]

Avatar Author: K-Jellybean You know that moment when you realize you're in over your head? "I am steeped in blood so far, that returning would be as tedious as going ahead." ***** I missed this place. I missed posting. I can't be the user that ... Read Bio

There are so many kinds of people in the world, but for Adam, it came down to two kinds: those who weren’t Eve and those who were. Eve was the only person in the world who mattered to Adam. She was smart and funny and so much more than he deserved…but she was his.

He waited for her to get home that night, sitting in her living room and breathing in the scent of her. She was so perfect and he was so flawed…but she was his. She breezed through the door and when she saw Adam, she dropped her bag in shock. Adam smiled, knowing he had gotten her. When he embraced her, she shivered and Adam smiled at how responsive she was to his touch.

He turned her around and unzipped her dress, pressing hard into her back by her liver. He slid into her and she gasped. He felt her: warm and dripping around him. His mouth watered and he kissed her neck as her head lolled to the side. She grew cold in his arms as he grew warm with her love. Then he pulled out his knife and smiled. She was beautiful and dead…and she was his.

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  1. Avatar Infinity.

    What a weird ending.
    The fact he feels obligated to kill her to make her feel completely his.
    I did look at your tags and it kind of gave away the ending but nonetheless, good.

  2. Avatar J. A. Keane

    Well, by jove!
    I guess it’s a good thing that The Dude in the champagne supernova in the sky threw Adam and Eve out of the Garden if Adam was gonna wind up going all homocidially psychotically necrophilic and whatnot…
    Very nice story, Jellybean!

  3. Avatar 32 ^2

    Yeah, once she decided to get trim and fit, she made a resolution to have at least one serving of fruit a day…

  4. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    oh, haha 32.
    The way you described the murder makes this all the more sinister.

  5. Avatar Abby (LoA)

    Laughing out loud at the comments right now…which has kind of ruined the creepiness of the tale. Thanks guys! Nice repetition of the ownership and it remains interesting even though it’s straight narrative. Very twisted. But great all the same.
    Abby x

  6. Avatar the_tandyman

    Twisted but cool. Like it.

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