The cats of the ocean

Avatar Author: Riley itty bitty writer from humble beginnings. find me: - http://ficlatte.com/authors/Riley - http://figment.com/users/267679-M-K- Read Bio

Oceanstar trotted in, paws sinking into the wet sand. The waves roared as they slapped the shore, and tropical birds hummed along with it. Insects joined in, making a perfect symphony of sound. He purred, and the song was complete. He purred, and the song was complete. He seemed to be MADE of the sea. His His eyes were the same color, and his fur bladed in with the sand. He sighed, and padded into the water. He quickly sighed in relief as the cool water absorbed him. As he delved deeper into the liquid, his thoughts became the same.

Liquid.

He gazed around, seeing all walks of life under the sea. This is why he loved his island.
This is why he WAS Oceanstar.

This is why he was home.

View this story's details

Prequels

Oh no! This story doesn't have a prequel. Want to fill in the blanks and write one?

Sequels

Oh no! This story doesn't have a sequel. Want to fill in the blanks and write one?

Comments (2 so far!)

  1. Avatar 32 ^2

    Nice Anime quality and feel to this.

  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    I was thinking more ‘The Journey Home’, that Disney one with the animals. Anime works too. It’s a lovely thoughtful piece.

    A few missteps along the way. You repeat the line about him purring. Later you say he sighed in two successive sentences, which could use a rewrite. You also doubled ‘his’ in one sentence.

    The capitalizes WAS might look a bit smoother if you type was to make it italics instead.

    There’s my editing tidbits for the day. Happy Ficlying!