Self Loathing Hate, distaste and distrust

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(Trusting friend)
They stand there in the shadows
day in and day out
mocking you behind your back
unknowing you love them so
These people you call your friends
I don’t see how you can
They mock you in these shadows
I want to slap them down

(insecure friend)
Your self talk is a pity
It tears you down
wearing you
from a blossom
to a stone
Your UN-trusting nature loses friendships
it lies keeping you at bay
Your enemies don’t know you
They fear your stalking stares
Your friends take you in
use you for a bit
chew you up and spit you out
like a dried up piece of shit

(non trusting friend)
Your fears run you ragged
they make you think the world is cold
everyone is out to get you
talking shit about your soul
Everyone loves you
your heart just tells you lies
in the end it too late
tis your friends
who will come to despise

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Comments (2 so far!)

  1. Avatar Reaver19

    very powerful stuff!

  2. Avatar Sage Autumn

    Thank you. I just people watch. I get bored.

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