Dedicated to the Ephemeral

Avatar Author: Robert Quick A no-name, aspiring author who can't stop writing. Looking ahead, he strives for perfection. Shackled by various forms of entertainment, he dreams of success. Most stories here are an invitation to YOU, to join me in cre... Read Bio

Kacey elbowed Kara. “Hey, wake up.”

“Urmph.”

Kacey shook her friend. “Seriously, wake up. There’s something weird out there.”

Kara opened one blood-shot eye. “What time is it? Be careful. If the answer ends in ‘am’, I reserve the right to smother you until you stop kicking.”

“There’s someone out there. I don’t like it.” Kacey said doggedly.

“Ugh. Fine.” Kara said, struggling into a sitting position. She opened the blinds and looked out at the darkened beach. An old man was sitting beyond the reach of the crawling water. A small overturned wagon lay nearby.

“Oh, I should have known. That’s the Sand Castle Man.”

“What?”

“He comes to the beach everyday and builds these amazing sandcastles. After he’s done, he just leaves. By the end of the day, there’s nothing left.”

“That seems sad. He live around here?”

“I guess he must, if he’s here everyday. We’ll go take a look AFTER I wake up.” Kara wiggled back down into the bedding, turning her back resolutely.

On the beach, the Sand Castle Man began to build.

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  1. Avatar BiC

    The ‘Sand Castle Man’. Neat idea. I appreciated that you used all capitals in ‘after’ instead of making it bold. ‘AFTER’ is a great chose of words when referring to sand castle building.

  2. Avatar Robert Quick

    Awww I liked the original comment. It was honest and raw and was what prompted me to send you a note, which led to the comment on the blog. But I still appreciate the great comment that has replaced the old one. Thank you.

  3. Avatar Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

    This makes me feel very alone