Alone

Avatar Author: Emilou My name is Emi. I welcome any constructive criticism because I know I need it. I love to read and write, among *many* other things. Read Bio

Hello…?
No answer.
No one’s home.
The doors are locked,
All the windows shut tight.

You hear someone whisper your name.

All the windows shut tight.
The doors are locked.
No one’s home.
No answer.
Hello…?

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Comments (4 so far!)

  1. Avatar Jim Stitzel

    Oooo! Recursive poetry!

  2. Avatar HSAR

    Nicely done.

  3. Avatar Riley

    I understand how you feel! I am one of the most paranoid people to ever grace this earth.

    I shudder at the thought!

  4. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Very well executed to work going in both directions. Makes me not want to be alone.