Disillusioned EnLIEightenment

Avatar Author: RoseTone ~LoA~ I can be reached at: stoneflowersofautumn@gmail.com "For creative Fantasy is founded upon the hard recognition that things are so in the world as it appears in under the sun; on a recognition of fact, but not a slaver... Read Bio

I like what I learned.
Hands, you do not have a clue.
If this is true, loyalty is inevitable.
I’m still struggling to stand.
As I said, the real
Reliable and reasonable.
I do not trust.
This is what I learned.

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  1. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Love it!
    “Hands, you do not have a clue.
    If this is true, loyalty is inevitable.”

  2. Avatar Amaris Wolfe

    That was ridiculously amazing! Wow! I love the whole poem, I can’t even pick apart the places where I love it most because it is just the best all over! Wow! Wow! Wow!

  3. Avatar Emilou

    I agree with those two—if anything, translating made the message more clear. Both the original and the last translation are amazing. Great job!

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