Aisle 6

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(ka-chunk)
BOOM!
(ka-chunk)
BOOM!
The two sounds pulper makes are always welcome ones.

Usually it only takes the rack and slide action of my Mossberg500 tactical shotgun to instantly wet anyones pants but when you’re dealing with the undead it takes the BOOM effect of a well-placed deer slug to the head to diffuse any situation. In case you were wondering, Pulper is the name I gave my shotgun due to the fact that it is the end result of said deer slug when it obliterates a zombies’ skull. Instant pulp!

As I moved through aisle 6 at my local supermarket I take my time with my shots. Placing them accurately and methodically at the 12 “walkers” in the isle.
Keeping pulper chin high against my left shoulder I take aim fire! Take aim fire! As I put down these ugly stinking flesh-eating fucks one at a time all the while telling my brother to not be picky just grab as much as he can.

“Cereal and oatmeal bro…don’t choose just take!” I say.

(He laughs) “Dude! When did you get so good with a gun?”

“I had to.”

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  1. Avatar 32 ^2

    Reaver, pulper is a fantastic weapon, I would suggest not having it in quotes, it almost minimizes it. Also, it’s name explains exactly what it is and does. The first time you introduce pulper, lead me to believe it was some form of companion , which it is, trusty. Maybe a better way to “explain” pulper, replace "it’ because “it” is pulper: Usually pulper, a Mossberg500 tactical shotgun, only takes the rack and slide action of to instantly wet anyones pants but when you’re dealing with the undead it takes the BOOM effect of a well-placed deer slug to the head to diffuse any situation. Pulper————deer slug——- obliterates a zombies’ skull.

    I believe that would be enough and most people would be satisfied with the introduction.

  2. Avatar Reaver19

    Okay got what you mean. It does slook better.

  3. Avatar LittleSecrets

    I like your play on this. However I think this story would be best one of two ways
    1. Furthering the descriptions of the gun and its mechanics that can kill
    2. Elaborating on the zombie apocalypse

    Also isle should be aisle. An isle is an island.

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