Rendezvous (continued)

Avatar Author: Reaver19 When you're knocked down, get back up and get your ass back in the fight! Read Bio

….it was taking alot out of me. And I only had my brother to help me. My other brother Garrett was serving what was left of this panicked country as a submarine torpedoman aboard the USS Wyoming off the coast of Washington state and we hadn’t heard from him or his wife for several months. Man I hope they’re all right…
The good thing about this nations’ military is it’s resourcefullness and it’s ability to put it’s servicemen above all else 1st on the survive at all costs list. Because we all know that General “so and so” isn’t gona pick up an M16 and get his nose bloody for anyone. So that means all 4 branches of our military made arrangements for the “immediate” members of their families to be brought along to the bases or “safe havens” of each respective branch. So my brother and his wife were hopefully either aboard a nuclear sub or floating on an aircraft carrier out in the ocean.

“Hey man, get back on the clock!” snapped my brother.
" Huh? Yeah man I’m good. We’re almost there, let’s go." I reply.

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Comments (2 so far!)

  1. Avatar r8r2683

    I’m digging all of it…..I knew you had it in you since we were kids. You were the brains of all our childhood operations. I’m proud to be a part of your stories in life and on paper. Love you brother keep em coming.

  2. Avatar LittleSecrets

    When I commented on aisle 6 I didn’t realize this was a series. Reading all of them I now get a better flow of what you are trying to achieve. I like the thought process of the main character. It is hard to clearly form thoughts into a written form that also mesh with the story line. My only suggestions would be to think about what tense you are in. Moving from present to past tense can be very tricky, but I think you have done a good job here. Remember that, and just keep writing. I would like to read more from this.

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