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Five Sense Challenge

The feeling of being pricked by a cactus

“Ouch!”, that was the first word come to my mind. At first, I didn’t feel any hurt. I just watched the tiny thorn stock in my thumb. I tried to get it off but I failed. After a few minute, I felt the hurt “grow up.” That’s really hurt just like someone was killing you by knife little by little. I tried to stop the pain but I couldn’t find the thorn. That was totally awful! When I touched my thumb, the pain struck me just like thunder. I looked for my mother to help. She is really an angle in my life. She used the needle to pick the thorn up and my pain was gone away. What a relief!

For the next writing the sequel, please choose one of these senses below to start with.
1. The smell of flower
2. The song “The show”
3. The feeling of getting lost
4. The taste of herbal tea
5. The scene of sparkling fireworks

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