on faith

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  1. Avatar JonB

    It’s a lovely bit of writing with all kinds of meaning to be drawn out of it. I like it.

  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    I’m not entirely sure what is what, but it’s a pleasant read all the same. I liked the line about God taking leave and the narrator being “the man of the world”, which makes for a nice play on words.

  3. Avatar 32 ^2

    Your line about clouds looking like dogs is fantastic. This piece is tightly braided, and full of mystery. I enjoy this piece very much.

  4. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Some insight in this fever-dream into a spiritual realm, and yet there is more, an urgency that all dreams have.

  5. Avatar contin

    Thank you :)

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