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Avatar Author: Abby (LoA) Gonna miss you guys so much. My 'official/professional' email is: abbywall2440@gmail.com in case anyone wants to keep in touch! Read Bio

“You told me you don’t like blondes,”
she accused,
When she caught me looking at a lady in a short white dress,
With straw coloured hair round her shoulders.
“Dark head, dark soul, you said,”
she said.
“People change,” I told her.
“And I like the light now.”

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  1. Avatar RoseTone ~LoA~

    Interesting how the dark one comes across as more argumentative – bitter, perhaps?

    I particularly enjoyed the “you said/she said” positioning. Not a constant fan of found poetry, but this works very well laid out the way you have done.

    This is very musical.

  2. Avatar In Night's Arms

    Hah who likes blondes?
    Anyway.
    It feels like one of those weird moments where you see someone for who they actually are, at least that’s how it felt to me.