Greenland Winter (Part 1)

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Lars, 5 and 10, was a sad boy- but not sad enough to die.

Dad would raise his voice just enough to ring the cedar house: “Come eat Lars, sit by the fire.” From wooden bowls they ate sausage with their hands, and Dad would down Siku vodka without a word.

Lars, 5 and 10, needed comfort- and Dad wasn’t.

It came that Lars drank some of Dad’s Siku. He wanted to be warm with fire-water, to feel a little burn. It did ember in him but it was a sick one. Dad found him sipping it wet eyed, grounded him for a month. No leaving the house, he had mumbled.

Lars, 5 and 10, was jealous of the wood in the fire place- he was too cold.

Lars would shake at the wood, tremble at it burning wholly yet still be alive, how it crackled so gleefully. Maybe the treeskin died but God did it go out in a way to be envied. Its aura particles of relief sputtered outward like at nighttime under the covers, a serene blessing of combustion not accessible to a not-yet-man.

Matches might be comfort, and Lars took them from the cupboard.

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  1. Avatar JonB

    Hugely evocative of cold and discomfort, and written in your distinctive style that generally makes it worth ploughing through to the end, despite being tripped up along the way.

    Your description of the fire is as magical as the thing itself.

  2. Avatar Jae

    Not sure what the 5 and 10 means.

  3. Avatar JonB

    …15, I guess, though a slightly character-hungry way of putting it. ‘5 and 10’ is better metrically, I suppose, so maybe that’s why. Unless I have the wrong end of the stick, and it means something else entirely.

  4. Avatar Escapist

    Yes, it’s 15 years old and was meant as both a metric device and also as a way to continually showcase Lars’ youth.

    Thank you for the comments, all.

  5. Avatar Cariad Ceffyl

    I assumed it was his age- an interesting way to put it- I like it though it adds to the atmosphere of the piece – like 4 and twenty means 24

  6. Avatar Cariad Ceffyl

    I assumed it was his age- an interesting way to put it- I like it though it adds to the atmosphere of the piece – like 4 and twenty means 24

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