Depressing Poem I

Avatar Author: Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA) Beneath the regular writers sits a young girl, pen trembling in her hand. She tries to put words on paper, but nothing comes out but painfully choppy verse. She drops the pen, looking up at the regulars in their creative ... Read Bio

My dearest friend has become Death,
My sister’s name is Pain,
Though while we’re not on speaking terms,
I feel we’ll be again.
Torture and Masochism are my cousins,
Never seen without the other,
Happiness has drifted out of view,
While Life has found another.
But I keep all these things to myself
Though dead and hurt inside,
I’ll plaster a smile on my face,
And continue to safely hide.

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  1. Avatar blusparrow (LoA)

    Awesome poem and very sad. It’s easy to relate to. If this is true, at least your leting it out on here =).

  2. Avatar OrangeOreos (LoA)

    That is a very well written poem, and the rhymes weren’t forced at all! Great job! I just hope it isn’t true!

  3. Avatar Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

    No, nonono. I had a moment and scrawled it. It is a completely fictional poem.

  4. Avatar .:Band Baby:.

    good poem sis. =) i really like the first few lines of this poem.

  5. Avatar Moonlightgirl

    like this one it really says alot in only a few words i like that

  6. Amj Lone Writer

    I know exactly how that feels.

  7. Avatar Alexa Reed (LoA)

    I’ve had that feeling too.

  8. Avatar Stovohobo

    Great analogies. Really emotive poem.

  9. Avatar nesdil

    I feel the exact same way. this is an amazing poem

  10. Avatar Brebelles {LoA}

    It is very sad, I can relate to this. Love it. :)

  11. Avatar The Fantastic Mister Fish