Counting

Avatar Author: Insert Pen Name Here Wow! Ficlets is back! Whoops, I mean Ficly :D Does anyone remember me from *sniff* our beloved, deceased Ficlets? Insert Pen Name Here, aka IPNH, aka Lane. I love to write, poems and fiction mostly. I was addicted ... Read Bio

Eighteen steps around the corner. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. Ten. Eleven. Twelve. Damn! Only twelve. Seven steps to the bench. One. Two. Three. Four. Fi-

“Hi, Chuckie!”

Damn.

“Hi, Dana.” Two.

“Whatcha doin?” Two.

“Not…much…” Two!

“Oh! Cool! Cause, well, I was wondering if you wanted to come-” Twelve. Damn. One- Two. Two times six-

“Chuckie! Did you hear me?”

Seventy-eight windows, thirteen balconies, two doormen- Seventy-eight plus thirteen equals ninety-one, nine plus one equals ten, ten minus two equals eight- seventy-eight-

“Fine. I’ll just leave then. Obviously I’m not wanted.” Nine- wait, what?

“Dana! Dana, wait…” Three

“No!”

One…

It always adds up to one.

View this story's details

Prequels

Oh no! This story doesn't have a prequel. Want to fill in the blanks and write one?

Sequels

Oh no! This story doesn't have a sequel. Want to fill in the blanks and write one?

Comments (3 so far!)

Average Reader Rating

  1. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    the OCD is very well illustrated

  2. Avatar uselessness

    You know, I suck for never judging this challenge. I’m so sorry for sucking. It’s about time to put this to rest, and… you win! Great story! I’m a sucker for fiction about OCD. :-)

  3. Avatar Insert Pen Name Here

    Aw thanks! Wow I suck for not finding this comment until now :)

This story's tags are