Avatar Author: K-Jellybean You know that moment when you realize you're in over your head? "I am steeped in blood so far, that returning would be as tedious as going ahead." ***** I missed this place. I missed posting. I can't be the user that ... Read Bio

“Oh fuck! Emily” I moaned breathlessly against her mouth.

“Sophia!” She cried and shuddered against me with the force of her climax. I held her close and let go, letting waves of ecstasy wash over me and carry me away. We collapsed in a heap on her bed, trying to catch up with our racing heartbeats. She curled up against me, running her fingers over my collarbone lightly. I kissed the top of her head and played with the ends of her dark red hair.

“Don’t ever let me go, okay?” she murmured in my ear sleepily.

“I promise I won’t,” I agreed.

“Does that mean you’ll hold my hand when I pee?”

“…I can’t promise anything.”

Emily laughed and my heart soared. I held her in my arms and bit my lip, knowing that if I opened my mouth I’d admit that if she asked me to—I would hold her hand when she peed. Just so that I would never have to let her go.

“I love you, Em.”

“You better.”

“Ha, or else what?”

“Or else I will set my parents on you.”

“Don’t you love me?”

“You should never have to ask.”

“I don’t.”

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  1. Avatar LaraLustre

    very tender tale, their youth shines out like daisies.

  2. Avatar LaraLustre

    very tender tale, their youth shines out like daisies.

  3. Avatar tas_13

    lesbians? oh well, guess you can’t stop true love..

  4. Avatar scratch'n'scrawl

    I think this piece of youthful intimacy is quite lovely…beautiful even. And the extra-copulatory dialogue and thought-patterns is pretty “real” also.

    That said, and I hope it is only a typo, but I’m a stickler for correct grammar unless it is intentionally part of the story. The last line of the second paragraph, I kissed the top of her head played with the ends of her dark red hair, I think should have the word “and” after the word “head”.

    Yeah, I know, I’m picky…but I still liked it a lot.

  5. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    God, how I miss those beautiful days. I remember the beginning of relationships past, how in love we were.

    Makes the breakup all the more painful.

    Beautifully written, Sophia. I couldn’t have put it in better words.

  6. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Wow thanks to all and very much so to scratch’n’scrawl, there should be an “and” i totally meant to put one there… wonder if it’ll fit…

  7. Avatar K-Jellybean

    ok, I took out some punctuation in order to fit the “and” :P so it’s still incorrect, but I find the “and” more important than the commas… maybe that’s just me

  8. Avatar TimothyX

    That really felt honest. Almost familiar. Loved it!

  9. Avatar The Red Death

    i love it

  10. Avatar K-Jellybean

    squeaks thanks .

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