Ripples

Avatar Author: Guin I'm just a gril. Read Bio

It happens that way
Life
One minute it’s great, unaboundfully joyful
The next minute?
Harsh, cruel
There is no noticable feeling of this change
But if one were to look back they would see the signs
Subtle
Like the last remaining ripples of water being disturbed
The disturbance is the joy
The end of the ripples leads to the calm
The cruel

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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    indeed, hindsight is 20/20!

  2. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    hindsight would hurt your neck elsha you are perv.

  3. Avatar mama murph (LoA)

    “the of the ripples leads to the calm” am I missing something? Other than that, I like it

  4. Avatar Guin

    Thanks mama murph. Let this be a lesson to all that PREVIEWING what you wrote is a good idea.
    Consider it updated!

  5. Avatar Radical Yellow Duck

    Huh? We aren’t talking about potato chips are we?

    I do not wish to be one with the potato, I wish the potato to become one with me.

  6. Avatar Textual Phoenix

    Very nice, Guin! I read it over twice to make sure I didn’t miss anything. Fabulous!

  7. Avatar Render

    You stole my style! I commend you.

  8. Avatar Render

    You stole my style! I commend you.